Cherry or Strawberry on a stick,
You know you want a lick!
Green fields are pulling me to go play
But the sucker wants me to stay.
Stay and lick it's sugary delight.
Can I make it last till night?
**UPDATE**
Now my son, Sam, has written a poem to go with the picture:
Little Lollipop, pop, pop, pop,
I give you a slurp.
I lick you with delight.
I can not wait till night.
Lollipop, lollipop good night.
And now two more that he just wrote off the top of his head:
It's a fact.
It's a fact.
We know it's really true
How about you?
Butter, butter
I truly adore you.
I like the goo
That is in you.
He really is a creative kid. LOVE HIM!
9 comments:
Sam's poems ROCK!!!! I liked his "reply" to your lollipop poem - especially about not waiting until night. The others were great also (and that's a fact!)
Sam is a creative little dude!
I can never turn down a cherry lollipop. Yum!
All those poems are great, you two got really creative.
it's true, I remember as a kid, saying just wait I'll play as soon as I finish my sucker! Couldn't run around with a stick coming out of my mouth. Great poems Sam!
These are all great and you are both very talented. Mine is not worth visiting I can tell you!
Great poems!
Wow! Very creative!
LOL!! :) Now I can't not smile when I see loliipops.
How fun to see all three poetic responses to Pensieve’s photo this week! ‘Red’ was THE ‘flavor’ for me when I was young ;--)
Mine’s posted at Small Reflections. Hope you’ll find time to visit!
Hugs and blessings,
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